Comments that will be made in my writing workshop tonight
1. I really liked it.
2. I didn't quite understand what was happening or why, but I liked that about it.
3. I loved how, at the end, I was super confused and then had to make up my own conclusion and then I really liked it.
4. I totally related to that moment where the dog ate that other dog and then puked and a kitten came out because that happened to my dog once too.
5. It seemed like you kept using the word "the" over and over and then I realized that when you wrote "the" you really meant "humankind," right?
6. Are you a lesbian or not?
7. You leave out a ton of details and setting stuff and it makes it so you have to guess everything and I enjoyed that.
8. I liked how s/he wrote that scene that had nothing to do with the story at all because it was interesting to know what had happened to the grandmother just as an aside.
9. I totally cracked up when I read the word "fuck."
10. I would leave it exactly the way it is right now except make it shorter.
11. I don't have the paper in front of me, but I remember liking it.
12. I think that scene you just mentioned really works because I don't remember it happening at all.
2. I didn't quite understand what was happening or why, but I liked that about it.
3. I loved how, at the end, I was super confused and then had to make up my own conclusion and then I really liked it.
4. I totally related to that moment where the dog ate that other dog and then puked and a kitten came out because that happened to my dog once too.
5. It seemed like you kept using the word "the" over and over and then I realized that when you wrote "the" you really meant "humankind," right?
6. Are you a lesbian or not?
7. You leave out a ton of details and setting stuff and it makes it so you have to guess everything and I enjoyed that.
8. I liked how s/he wrote that scene that had nothing to do with the story at all because it was interesting to know what had happened to the grandmother just as an aside.
9. I totally cracked up when I read the word "fuck."
10. I would leave it exactly the way it is right now except make it shorter.
11. I don't have the paper in front of me, but I remember liking it.
12. I think that scene you just mentioned really works because I don't remember it happening at all.
Comments
-tara